Sleep seep
Sleep Sleep
Seep Seep
Thoughts Creep,
The hand is present with the voice of the past
Moving from and zoning away..Sleep Sleep
Distant stare, mixed love, for droves
Snapping lines in traditions rhyme
Dearest
Sleep Sleep
Seep Seep
Thoughts Creep,
The hand is present with the voice of the past
Moving from and zoning away..Sleep Sleep
Distant stare, mixed love, for droves
Snapping lines in traditions rhyme
Dearest
Sleep Sleep
posted by Venkatesh Chandru at 10:35 AM
3 Comments:
Slumber was never well described before - hope you donot sleep off reading this comment :-)
Watch out for my new posts to be published shortly, didnot have enough energy for the past couple of months to post something new, probably age is catching up on the neurons.
Hope ur School project is going on track.
Later, Till next posting.
Hey, very nice poem! Read through the rest of it... It's all very nicely written, in the sense that I feel that I can nearly understand what you're talking about but not quite! This one I liked best so I'm commenting here. :D
Blog on...
ah now in this poem i can get the hang of it...a little bit...still a little tough 4 me...but quite nice...i mean it has a really good touch 2 it...kz...au revoir! take care...
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